CraftCurrent IssueWinter 2013Writing Tips

First Things Third: How to Write a Great Beginning

By M. Molly Backes

Personally, I think the beginning of a story is the hardest part to write. When I was working on The Princesses of Iowa, I wrote the ending once and didn’t change much in revisions. I rewrote some chapters in the middle quite a bit, while I hardly touched others. But the beginning?

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CraftCurrent IssueFall 2012Writing Tips

Speak the Speech: Dialogue Lessons from Improv

By M. Molly Backes

Like any good Chicagoan, I’ve studied improv, and much of what I know about writing fiction I learned in improv classes. The two have a lot in common. They’re both concerned with human relationships. They both work best when they trust their audience to help them build a story together (my fiction professor

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CraftCurrent IssueSpring 2012Writing Tips

What’s Your Dominant Metaphor? Creating Character Voice

By M. Molly Backes

Almost every editor in the world will tell you she’s looking for a manuscript with a strong narrative voice, but creating a rich, complex, and believable character voice is easier said than done. Voice isn’t just the way your character speaks—not just her dialogue or diction or syntax. It’s not just the words

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CraftCurrent IssueWinter 2012Writing Tips

Unstick Yourself

By M. Molly Backes

If you’re reading this article, you’re probably doing everything right. You’re a member of SCBWI, and you actively work to build your network of fellow writers. You’re a student of storycraft. You spend a lot of time thinking about structure and plot and characterization and how to hook your reader. Your bookshelves are

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CraftCurrent IssueFall 2011Writing Tips

More Than a Pounding Heart: Capturing Emotional Experience

By M. Molly Backes

You’ve come to an emotionally intense moment in your story. Your character’s heart pounds in her chest, her mouth goes dry, hair stands up on the back of her neck. Her fists clench, her teeth grind together, her face gets hot. Her frozen blood moves like ice through her veins.

The problem? This is

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CraftCurrent IssueSpring 2011Writing Tips

You Can’t Always Get What You Want (But You Might Just Get What You Need)

By M. Molly Backes

Kurt Vonnegut famously said, “Every character should want something, even if it’s just a glass of water.”

So, I ask my students, what does your character want? Too often, they give me blank looks. Their stories have beautiful scenes, well-rendered settings, witty dialogue, memorable characters, and protagonists who stand in the center of the

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Winter 2011Writing Tips

Don’t Start in the Middle

By M. Molly Backes

In medias res. You’ve heard it a thousand times from a thousand different teachers and writers. It’s right up there with “Write What You Know” and “Show, Don’t Tell” on the list of Writer’s Commandments (along with “Thou Shalt Not Spend Too Much Time on Facebook” and “Thou Probably Shouldn’t Try to Give

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Autumn 2010Writing Tips

Pattern Perfect

By Jennifer Ward

Patterns are everywhere. People create them on buildings, in textiles, in homes—just look at the patterns that surround you as you read this. Patterns exist in nature as well—google the Fibonacci sequence; you’ll never look at a flower, a pinecone, or a seashell the same way again! And now, we are enjoying the pattern

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Spring 2010Writing Tips

Writing Road Maps: Plotting the Structure of Your Picture Book

By Jennifer Ward

Getting an idea for a book can be exciting! However, transforming that idea into a complete story can be a challenge. What direction will your words take? Where do you begin and where do you end?

Just as I travel unfamiliar city streets with a navigational system to guide my way (love you, Ms. Garmin!),

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Winter 2010Writing Tips

New Year, New Goals, New Contributor

By Jennifer Ward

Hello, fellow SCBWI-Illinois members.

Happy New Year!

My name is Jennifer Ward, and I look forward to getting to know you as I share strategies, content, and wisdom pertaining to writing children’s literature. I will do my best to fill the void left by Carmela Martino. (The Prairie Wind will miss you here, Carmela!) But we

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